User blog:Bobinti/Wiki Grammar.

Okay, so I've had a glance here and there throughout this wiki, and have noticed some of the wiki-grammar on here is weak (to say the least).

So, I've taken my time to give you an example of how wiki articles should be written:

 EXAMPLE VERBATIM:

Flying in the Face of Danger is the 4th level in Avalonia. This is possibly one of the hardest levels to ace because of all the chances to die. One advantage you have is having a 'base' around you when you come out of the spaceship.

Walkthrough
When you come out, Avalon teaches you to use the H.O.N.E.Y. cannon. Press X to shoot. Then you get some practice by shooting some evil guys. (There is one type that shoots plasma balls, try to kill them ASAP! Another one has a laser around it. These take 3 shots to knock out.) Then the true test of ducking and weaving comes. Try not to get all of the prize bubbles on your first trip, unless you really dont care about dying. When you are done with all that, here comes the fast motion part.

 EXAMPLE WITH MY NARRATION

Flying in the Face of Danger is the 4th level in Avalonia. This is possibly one of the hardest levels to ace because of all the chances to die  '[This is not an official fact about the level. This is opinion, and should not be stated on a wiki article] .One advantage  you [Never directly-address the reader in a wiki article. Always write 'the player' or something similar] have is having a   'base'  [Details? A base could be anything] ' around you when you come out of the spaceship.

Walkthrough
When you come out, Avalon teaches you to use the H.O.N.E.Y. cannon. Press X to shoot  [This is directly-addressing the reader  ]. Then you get some practice by shooting some '''evil guys. (There is one type that shoots plasma balls, try to kill them ASAP! Another one has a laser around it. These take 3 shots to knock out.) Then the true test of ducking and weaving comes. Try not to get all of the prize bubbles on your first trip, unless you really dont care about dying. When you are done with all that, here comes the fast motion part.''' [Extremely informal - also, try to break your content down into paragraphs]

 MY EDIT:

Flying in the Face of Danger is the 4th Story level in the Avalonia chapter of LittleBigPlanet 2's Story Mode.

Walkthrough
When the player enters the level, Avalon teaches them how to use the H.O.N.E.Y. cannon, though a series of 'practice chambers'. These practice chambers contain many 'enemies' and tricky gameplay-elements, common to many LittleBigPlanet levels.

As progression increases, as does the speed. The player's reaction times and skills are tested in this level.

Of course, I know this isn't perfect - but it is extremely more wikipedia-like than the original post.